考研英语作文跑题,还有分吗?

这几天,不断有同学提问,问这么写行吗?那么写行吗?如果偏题或跑题了,作文还有分吗?
首先,不是为了安慰大家,一般阅卷时,阅卷老师不会轻易打零分,因为很难有人能把作文写的一点都不切题。
因此,只要和题干内容沾边,就不算跑题,就一定有分。
还有同学担心小作文漏掉了落款或写错了称谓,问会扣几分?答案是最多影响一分。
英语一写作部分
51.Directions: One foreign friend of yours has recently graduated from college and intends to find a job in China. Please write an email to him/her to make some suggestions.
You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET.
Do not use your own name in the email. Use “Li Ming” instead. (10 points)
【破题思路】
首段:寒暄+目的
二段:提建议
尾段:展望
【参考范文】
Dear Sky,
As your friend, I am quite delighted to hear that you intend to find a job in China and today, I am writing to make several suggestions.
First, it is advisable for you to seek a job in Beijing, the capital city of China, which is characterized by the abundant employment opportunities. In addition, compared with others, you, as a native English speaker, have more advantages in teaching English and you have been working as a part-time teacher during the past years. Thus, I suggest that you try to apply for a teaching position in training organizations.
I deem that your excellent teaching will bring Chinese students great efficiency, arouse their passion for English learning and help them speak English fluently.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【汉语译文】
亲爱的思凯:
作为您的朋友,我很高兴听说您打算来中国找工作。今天,我写信提点建议。
首先,你应该来北京找工作,北京是中国的首都,其突出特征就是就业机会很多。此外,与其他人相比,作为母语是英语的人,您在教英语方面具有很多优势而且过去的这几年,你还一直兼职做英语老师。因此,我建议您可以试着在培训机构申请一个教学岗位。
我相信你出色的教学将会给中国学生带来效率,唤起他们对英语的热情,并帮助他们流利说英语。
您真诚的
李明
Part B
52.Directions:
Write an essay of 160–200 words based on the pictures below. In your essay, you should
1) describe the pictures briefly,
2) interpret the implied meaning, and
3) give your comments.
Write your answer on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)
【简析】
本文可以从以下多个角度入手展开:坚持做自己喜欢的事情、自信、独立思考、不盲从、父母正确鼓励孩子、等;但如果只写传统文化,未涉及上述内容,则有偏题的嫌疑。
此外,有同学说不小心把hobby写成了habit, 是不是就影响很大?
答案是:如果只是这个主题词写错了,其他地方都写对了,应该不会有较大影响;但我有理由怀疑,能把hobby写成habit,其他地方可能也存在类似的错误。
【破题思路】
首段:描述图画
中间段:阐述寓意
尾段:建议号召
【参考范文】
This is a simple but enlightening cartoon, in which there is a youngster, with great disappointment on his face, wearing the constume of Monkey King and complaining, “I want to learn the traditional opera, but my friend told me that it is boring.” Then, his father encourages him, “What does matter is that you like it.”
The father’s encouragement, apparently, can be associated to the significance of sticking to one’s dream. To my understanding, successful figures are characterized by their various merits, such as their optimism, confidence, diligence and independent thinking. However, in reality, so many young people, like the boy in the picture, are often affected by others’ opinions and even give up what they really want. This phenomenon is particularly worth concerning for the reason that they pay excessive attention to what others say, ignoring the importance of adhering to their own thoughts. In fact, this negative state of mind has constituted an obstacle that hinders their progress and growth.
I, as a college student, deem that it is of great necessity for us to do what we like, which can bring us power, arouse our passion for striving and help us eventually achieve dreams. Everyone should bear in mind that it is our perseverance not others’ comments that leads to our own success and a promising future.
【参考译文】
这是一幅简单但有启发性的漫画。图画中,有个年轻人,穿着孙悟空的戏服,很失望地抱怨说:“我想学戏曲,但朋友说这很无趣。”然后,他的爸爸就鼓励他,说:“你喜欢,才是最重要的。”
显然,这位父亲的鼓励能联系到一个人坚持梦想的重要性。在我看来,成功人士的突出特征就在于他们身上的各种优点,例如乐观、自信、勤奋和独立思考。然而,在现实中,很多年轻人跟图画中的小男孩很像,他们经常受到他人观念的影响甚至会放弃自己真正想要的。这种现象非常值得关注,因为他们过于关注的是别人说什么,忽略了坚持自己梦想的重要性。事实上,这种消极的心态已经构成了一种障碍,阻碍着他们的进步和成长。
作为一名大学生,我认为我们很有必要去做自己喜欢的事,这会带给我们动力,唤起我们对奋斗的热情渴望,帮助我们最终实现梦想。每个人都应该记住:引领通向我们成功和美好未来的是我们的坚持而不是别人的评论。
英语二写作部分
小作文
Part A
47.Directions:
Suppose you are organizing an online meeting. Write an email to Jack, an international student, to
1) invite him to participate, and
2) tell him the details.
You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET.
Do not use your own name. Use “Li Ming” instead.
Do not write your address. (10 points)
破题思路:
首段:自我介绍+写信目的
二段:介绍会议
尾段:期待
Dear Jack,
I, on behalf of the Students' Union, am writing to invite you to participate in an online meeting.
This meeting is scheduled to start at 14:00 on December 20 and participants include all international students and relevant teachers. This meeting is for the purpose of introducing certain activities concerning cross-cultural communication. It is advsiable for you to attend this meeting becuase it may bring you opportunities to know China better, arouse your passion for Chinese culture and help you adapt to college life here. In addition, you are supposed to prepare some questions and teachers will be glad to answer.
This meeting will be held via Tecent Meeting and thus, it is necessary for you to install the APP in advance.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
亲爱的杰克:
我代表学生会写这封信邀请您来参加一次在线会议。
这次会议计划于12月20日14:00开始,参会者包括全体留学生和相关老师。此次会议目的是介绍一些跨文化交流的活动。你要参加这次的会议,因为这次会议将带给你了解中国的机会,唤起你对中国文化的热爱,帮助你适应这里的校园生活。此外,你们可以准备一些问题,到时候老师会予以解答。
此次会议将通过腾讯会议来开,因此,你们有必要提前按照这个APP。
你诚挚的
李明
 Part B
48.Directions:Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should
1) interpret the chart, and
2) give your comments.
You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)
Given is a bar chart, clearly illustrating striking contrasts in the ways of citizens’ physical exercise in a certain city. Overall, exercising alone is the largest proportion, which accounts for 54.3%. The next is working out with friends, with 47.7%. Finally come doing exercise with family members and participating in team activities, at 23.9% and 15.8% respectively.
Such statistics above, apparently, can be associated with the prevalence of exercising among citizens, but what result in the differences? For one thing, most residents in cities are characaterized by their great pressure in work and busy schedule in daily life, which enable exercising alone to be the priority. For another, compared with other manners, working out with friends can bring them greater motivation, arouse their passion for sports and help them strengthen their friendship.
I, as a college student, deem that it is of great necessity for youngsters to do sports every day. It is doing sports that enables us to maintain physical and mental health.
所给的是一个柱状图,清晰展示了某城市市民锻炼法方式方面的显著差别。整体看,独自锻炼的是最大的比重,占到了54.3%。排在第二位的是与朋友一起锻炼,占47.7%。最后是与家人一起锻炼和参加集体活动,分别占23.9%和15.8%。
显然,上述数据能联系到锻炼身体在市民中受到的普遍欢迎,但是什么导致了上述差异?一方面,多数城市居民的突出特征在于他们工作压力大、日常生活时间紧凑,这使得独自锻炼成为他们的首选。另一方面,与其他方式相比,与朋友一起锻炼可以带给他们更强的动力,唤起他们对运动的热情,帮助他们提升友谊。
作为一名大学生,我认为年轻人很有必要每天运动。正是运动使得我们保持身体和心理的健康。

同时,说一下,作文如何估分?
将自己写的作文和参考范文进行对比,如果和参考范文差不多,可以打一个80%-60%的得分,如果差很多,建议打50%以下即可。
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