英语作文:体罚 Physical Punishment

初一英语作文：

For the old generation, they trend to do physical punishment when their children make mistakes. They believe that the best way to educate children is to threaten them and then correct their wrong behaviors. But the old way to educate kids is out of date. It is better to guide children to realize their mistake would bring what kinds of horrible results. The way the adults nurture them decides what personality they will have when they grow up. Violence will not solve problems but only brings more negative sides. So we need to be reasonable instead of emotional. 
对老一代来说，他们倾向于在孩子犯错误的时候进行体罚。他们认为教育孩子的最好方法是威胁他们，然后纠正错误的行为。但是老一套教育孩子的方法已经过时了，最好是引导孩子们意识到自己的错误会带来怎样可怕的后果。成年人培养孩子的方式会决定孩子长大后的个性。暴力不能解决问题，只会带来更多消极的方面。因此我们需要理智而不是情绪化。