状语从句的“瘦身”秘诀,让写作既简约又精炼

在英语的实际应用中,有时上下文或当时的语境能够帮助我们理解所写的内容,所以有的时候可以省去一个或更多的句子成分,但前提是不影响句子的理解和可读性,因此若有具体的上下文支撑,是可以省去部分成分。

跟定语从句的“瘦身”原理类似,状语从句也可以“瘦身”,这种“瘦身”原理就是省略。若从句的主语与主句的主语一样,那么通常可以省略从句的主语或助词,然后动词做相应的变化,例如:
While Sarah was studying, she fell asleep.
萨拉在学习时睡着了。
解析:此句可以省略,因为从句中的主语和主句中的主语都是 Sarah,因此可以省略为 While studying, she fell asleep,但是以下这句不能省略,例如:
While Sarah was talking, I fell asleep.
萨拉说话的时候,我睡着了。
解析:从句中的主语 Sarah 和主句的主语 I 不一样,所以不能省略。

一、状语从句带 be 动词的省略
在带 be 动词(am, is, are, was, were, been, being)的状语从句中,直接省略主语和 be 动词,例如:
1. 萨拉在学习时睡着了。
While she was studying, Sarah fell asleep.
省略:While studying, Sarah fell asleep.
2. 尽管他迟到了,他还是被允许去看电影。
Although he was late, he was admitted to the movie.
省略:Although late, he was admitted to the movie.

二、状语从句不带 be 动词的省略

在不带 be 动词(am, is, are, was, were, been, being)的状语从句中,直接省略主语,然后把对应的动词变成 -ing 形式,例如:
1. 杰克读完这本书后,把它放回书架上。
After he finished the book, Jack put it back on his shelf.
省略:After finishing the book, Jack put it back on his shelf.
2. 在去火车站之前,玛丽亚要核对一下火车时刻表。
Before she goes to the train station, Maria will check the train schedule.
省略:Before going to the train station, Maria will check the train schedule.

三、 while 引导的状语从句的省略
1. 当 while 引导的时间状语从句以 while 开头,且表示主从句的动作同时发生时,while 从句用进行时,那么省略规则跟其他带 be 动词的从句一样省略主语和 be 动词,就是去掉主语和 be 动词,例如:
当他们骑自行车时,学生们看见一个马戏团进城来。
While they were riding their bikes, the students saw a circus coming into town.
省略:While riding their bikes, the students saw a circus coming into town.
此时的 while 也可以一起省略,比如上面省略后的例句还可以进一步省略:
While riding their bikes, the students saw a circus coming into town.
省略:Riding their bikes, the students saw a circus coming into town.
2. 当 while 引导的时间状语从句出现在句中时, while 就不能再省略了,例如:
学生们骑自行车时看到一个马戏团进城。
The students saw a circus coming into town while riding their bikes.
❌: The students saw a circus coming into town riding their bikes.
3. 当 while 引导让步状语从句时,首先要保留 while 和去掉从句中的主语,若从句中有 be 动词,则去掉 be 动词保留名词或形容词,此时的 while 不能省略,例如:
虽然他是一个快乐的人,但他有许多严重的问题。
While he was a happy man, he had many serious problems.
省略:While happy, he had many serious problems.

四、as,since,because 引导的原因状语从句的省略
1. 这三个连词引导的从句的省略规则是一样的,就是直接去掉连词和主语,然后对应的动词用 -ing 形式,例如:
因为他迟到了,所以他开车去上班。
Because he was late, he drove to work.
省略:Being late, he drove to work.
因为她累了,所以睡得很晚。
Since she was tired, she slept in late.
省略:Being tired, she slept in date.
由于汤姆有额外的工作要做,因此他工作到很晚。
As Tom had extra work to do, he stayed late at work.
省略:Having extra work to do, Tom stayed late at work.
2. 当从句中的动词是否定形式时,要在省略后动词的 -ing 形式前面加 not,例如:
由于他不想打扰她,因此他很快离开了房间。
As he didn't want to disturb her, he left the room quickly.
省略:Not wanting to disturb her, he left the room quickly.
因为她不明白这个问题,所以她请老师帮忙。
Because she didn't understand the question, she asked the teacher for some help.
省略:Not understanding the question, she asked the teacher for some help.

五、As,before,after,since,when 和 as soon as 引导的时间状语从句
1. before,after 和 since 这几个连词引导的从句的省略规则都是:保留时间连词,去掉主语,把动词变成 -ing 形式或用名词,例如:
他考试后睡了很长时间。
After he took the test, he slept for a long time.
省略:After taking the test, he slept for a long time. (-ing 形式)
省略:After the test, he slept for a long time. (名词)
自从我搬到罗切斯特,我去了爱乐乐团无数次。
Since I moved to Rochester, I have been to the Philharmonic numerous times.
省略:Since moving to Rochester, I have been to the Philharmonic numerous times.
2.  as 引导的从句的省略规则是:去掉 as 和主语和 be 动词,把动词变成 -ing 形式,此时跟 while 引导的时间状语从句类似,表示主从句动作同时发生,例如:
当我睡着的时候,我想起了我在意大利的朋友们。
As I was falling asleep, I thought about my friends in Italy.
省略:Falling asleep, I thought about my friends in Italy.
她开车去上班时,看见路上有一只鹿。
As she was driving to work, she saw a deer in the road.
省略:Driving to work, she saw a deer in the road.
3. as soon as 引导的从句的省略规则是:用 upon 或 on 代替 as soon as,去掉主语,把动词变成 -ing 形式,例如:
她一写完报告就把它交给了老板。
As soon as she finished the report, she gave it to the boss.
省略:Upon finishing the report, she gave it to the boss.
我们一醒来,就拿着钓竿到湖边去了。
As soon as we woke up, we got our fishing poles and went to the lake.
省略:On/Upon waking up, we got our fishing poles and went to the lake.
4. when 引导的时间状语从句省略规则
1. 在表达主从句动作先后发生时,省略规则跟 as soon as 类似,用 upon 或 on 代替 when,去掉主语,把动词变成 -ing 形式,例如:
桑德拉大学毕业后申请了一份工作。
When Sandra graduated from university, she applied for a job.
省略:On/Upon graduating from university, she applied for a job.
2. 当表达主从句的动作同时发生时,省略规则跟 while 引导的时间状语从句类似,省略主语和 be 动词,例如:
当你晚上独自在巴黎的街道上行走时,要小心。
When you are walking alone at night in Paris streets, be careful.
省略:When walking alone at night in Paris streets, be careful.
3. 在被动语态或从句中含有 be 动词时,可以省略从句的主语和 be 动词,例如:
他小时候很淘气。
When he was a little boy, he was very naughty.
省略:When a little boy, he was very naughty.
如果单词或短语使用太频繁,可能会失去其价值。
When they are used too often, words or phrases may lose their value.
省略:When used too often, words or phrases may lose their value.
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