四级真题必备作文+话题词预测
虽然四级写作这几年的写作命题的体裁在不断变化,
但写作的内容上却有大量的重复性,
例如:
2016年6月要求写信感谢家人、朋友和老师;但其内容上却重复了2014年12月的考题
2015年12月所考的话题为三种优秀品质,即:终生学习、聆听他人建议、和行动的重要性;本质上重复了2013年6月的做好小事的重要性和2011年12月坚强意志力的重要性
2015年6月份所考的是三篇作文中;父母在孩子成长中的作用的考题重复了2010年12月考题;网络对人际交流的影响的考题重复了2013年12月的考题;孩子对教育的理解的考题重复了2013年12月的考题
因此,不敢说2016年12月一定重复之前的考题,但这种可能性不能不值得警惕。此外,本文还提供了预测话题关键词供大家学习。
每年的四级考前,我们都会总结一些写作翻译的“救命资料”帮助已经上过课的同学进行复习,同时帮助“裸考”的同学考前“磨刀”。It is no exception this year.
各位,再叮嘱几句!
作文要背诵到走进考场前的最后一刻。拿到作文务必读三遍,找出体裁、话题和内容要求,尤其是其中的“名、动、形、副”四类词,然后结合背诵的功能句和题干关键词写作文,尽量写背诵过的表达。
以下内容,只要认真掌握,写作翻译就必然提分。但请牢牢记住:“看懂了”不等于“能记住”,“能记住”不等于“会应用”;因此,多动笔背写并仿写才是提升的关键。
记住:多篇作文中重复性表达是复习的重中之重,因为这些词汇、表达或句式可以使用在近十多次考试中,那么,就很有可能再次成为你写译提分的利器。
建议每篇作文和翻译都按照以下方式处理:抄写范文或译文---英译汉—汉译英—对比查错—背写出错之处。
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
首段:图画描述
(引入图画)This is a simple but thought-provoking cartoon: (图画描述:人/物+动作+环境+文字) the youngster/ guy expresses his worries about “disposing of nuclear waste”; to his surprise, his father responds/answers: “If you can empty the dustbin here, you can do anything.”
二段:图画主题+现象+意义
(图画联系主旨) Obviously, this picture can be naturally associated with the importance of doing small things: (主题评论) if youngsters intend to achieve success, it is advisable for them to begin with little things. (现象概述) In the contemporary society, it has become a trend for a host of teenagers to ignore tiny things in life: cleaning rooms, washing clothes and emptying dustbins. (相关人+感受) Meanwhile, an increasing number of young people find it rather useless or unnecessary to deal with these things.(举例) A case in point is the boy in the picture. However, (意义) it is these small tasks that enable youngsters to build up adequate knowledge, ability and experience. (万能总结) As a matter of fact, intelligent people in large numbers have come to realize the significance of doing small things.
(补充举例2)Taking a look around, we can notice a great many young people like the boy in the picture.
(意义句补充) Doing small things brings us skills, arouses our enthusiasm/ passion for success, and helps us to make progress.
尾段:观点+建议+展望
(观点:尾段首句万能) As a college student, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for youngsters to enhance ourselves by doing small things. (万能建议) Thus, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends, classmates and acquaintances to cultivate this awareness/habit. (展望1:)Sparing no efforts to do so, we can witness a hopeful and promising future of our life, work and study. (展望2:) Do bear in mind: no small progress, no success. /small progresses lead to a big success.
相关话题词汇:(做好小事是一种优秀品质或正能量,那么此相关的词还有很多,不妨认识一下?说不定这次就考到了)
自信Self-Confidence
诚实Honesty
谦虚Modesty
奋斗Strive
团队精神&合作Teamwork Spirit &
Cooperation
竞争Competition
实事求是The Fittest Is the Best
社会公德Public Morality
礼貌Politeness
提高个人修养Shaping the Morality
爱心Love
责任Responsibility
美丽Beauty
理解、谅解Understanding
可持续发展Sustainable Development
美德Virtue
谨慎Prudence
尊老爱幼Respect the Old and Care for the Young
仁义道德Virtue and Morality
挫折与坎坷Twists and Turns
逆境Setbacks
成功无捷径There Is No Shortcut to Success
终身学习Life-Long Study
从小事做起Start from Small Details
人生处处面临选择We Are Always Faced Various Choices
幽默感A Sense of Humor
沟通Communication
身心健康Physical and Mental Health
捐献Donation
人才的素质The Qualities of the Talents
业余爱好Hobbies
爱国主义Patriotism
感谢对手Expressing Thanks to Our Rivals
欣赏Appreciation
关爱True Love
信念Conviction
奉献 Contributions
梦想 Ambitions
勤奋Diligence
耐心Patience
成功Success
机遇Opportunity
挑战Challenge
勤俭节约Thrifty
创新Innovation
拼搏精神The Determined Spirit
奉献精神The Dedication Spirit
和谐社会Harmonious Society
打好基础的重要性The Importance of Fundamentals/Basic Skills
话题:On English Learning
内容要求(提纲):
1. 英语很重要
2. 学习英语中的困难
3. 如何学好英语
【参考范文】
In the contemporary world, English learning has gained great popularity and it is of great significance for youngsters to learn English well. Based on a survey, a majority of international organizations or firms acknowledge that they prefer recruiting employees who can speak English fluently.
However, a host of English learners may have a variety of difficulties or troubles in learning. For instance, a large number of students find it difficult to memorize new words. Frequently, it is also difficult for them to understand rules of English grammar. In addition, though some are good at reading or writing, they fail to express themselves freely in oral English.
Then, how to get a good command of this language? I am convinced that practice makes perfect. Only practice can help me to master grammatical knowledge and remember new words. And it is also through practice that I can speak and write fluently, and there is no other way. I deem that if I try my utmost to practice English every day, the future of my English learning will be promising and hopeful. (179words)
译文:
在当今世界,英语学习受到普遍欢迎,而且年轻人学好英语很重要。根据一项调查,绝大多数国际组织或公司承认他们更偏爱招聘英语流利的员工。
然而,很多英语学习者可能在学习中有诸多困难或麻烦。例如,很多学生发现很难背会生词。他们也经常很难理解语法规则。此外,尽管一些学生擅长读写,但未能使用口语流利表达自我。
那么,如何学好这门语言。我相信熟能生巧。只有练习实践能有助于掌握语法规则同时背会单词。也正是通过实践我能在说和写方面变得流利,别无他法。如果我全力去每天练习,未来我的英语学习将充满希望。
相关话题词汇:(与学习相关的词汇也可以用到第一篇的扩展词汇,此外还有很多,不妨认识一下?考到你就爽了)
熟能生巧Practice Makes Perfect
读书的快乐The Pleasure of Reading
拼搏Struggling
放弃 Give Up
应试教育 Test-oriented Education System
面试前的准备Preparation for the Interview
助学贷款Students’ Loans
正确择业 Choosing the Right Career
能力Ability/competence
创新Innovation
感谢Gratitude
悲观心态Pessimistic Mind
乐观心态Optimistic Mind
失败Failure
知识Knowledge
自律Self-Discipline
无目标的Aimless
珍惜时间Cherishing Time
大学生就业难It’s Difficult for University Students to Look for Job/Difficulty Hunting for Jobs of College Students
失学Dropping Out of School/Leaving School
只注重考试成绩Exam-Oriented Education
死读书Study in a Rigid Way/Stressing Only Exam Scores
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Education Pays based on the statistics provided in the chart below (Weekly earnings in 2010). Please give a brief description of the chart first and then make comments on it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
首段:图表描述
(引出图表)This is a simple but enlightening chart by US Bureau of Labor: (图表描述万能) in 2010, it had become a trend for doctors, masters and bachelors to earn more money in a week in US--- $1551, $1272 and $1038. Meanwhile, other individuals could not enjoy satisfactory earnings, if they did not receive better education.
二段:主题评论+现象+意义
(图表联系主题)Obviously, this chart can be naturally associated with the importance of education: (图表内容评论)if individuals intend to acquire/ get better earnings, it is advisable for them to gain higher degrees. (现象)In the contemporary America, it is a common phenomenon for a host of companies/ firms/ corporations/ organizations to hire/ employ/ recruit doctors and masters and pay them better salaries. (相关人+感受) And an increasing number of youngsters find it rather difficult to get better jobs, if they do not get better education. (意义) It is education that enables them to build up adequate knowledge, skills and ability to deal with important tasks. (总结)As a matter of fact, employees and employers in large numbers have come to realize the significance of higher degrees.
尾段:观点+号召
(观点)As a college student, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for youngsters to enhance ourselves by studying hard and getting better degrees. (号召)Do bear in mind: education is or means a worthy investment.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “Never go out there to see what happens, go out there to make something happen.” You can cite examples to illustrate the importance of being participants rather than mere onlookers in life. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
【试题解析】
就本题而言,很多同学读懂了“Never go out there to see what happens, go out there to make things happen.”这句话,但依然懵逼不知写什么。根本原因在于“只见树木不见森林”, 忽视了“You can cite examples to illustrate the importance of being participants rather than mere onlookers in life.”这句话的提示作用。
提醒各位同学:作文务必全面审题。可以从三个方面入手:体裁和话题、内容要求、字数。本题体裁要求为essay,话题为the importance of being participants rather than mere onlookers in life,即“做生活的参与者而不是旁观者的重要性”; 内容要求对话语进行评论,字数限制为120-180,一般而言字数略微超出并不会扣分。
This is a simple but enlightening remark: “Never go out there to see what happens, go out there to make things happen.” Obviously, this saying can be naturally associated with the importance of being participants in life.
In the contemporary society, it has become a trend for some youngsters to have ambitious dreams for life, work and study. Meanwhile, a host of teenagers find it exceedingly difficult to achieve success, if they just wait there to see what happens. A case in point is English learning. It is constant practice that enables learners to accumulate adequate grammatical knowledge, vocabulary and fluent oral English. As a matter of fact, intelligent individuals in large numbers have come to realize the significance of being a participant rather than an onlooker.
I, as a college student, deem that it is of vital necessity for youngsters to refuse to be merely onlookers. Do bear in mind: being merely onlookers can never make things happen. Accordingly, we should encourage our friends and classmates to take actions immediately to realize their dreams.
【参考范文】
这是一个简单但有启发性的话语:不要只是出去看发生了什么,而是行动起来让事情发生。显然,这句话能自然联系到在生活中做行动者的重要性。
在当今社会,一些年轻人普遍拥有对生活、工作和学习的伟大梦想。同时很多年轻人发现如果只是等待旁观,就很难实现他们的梦想。一个典型的例子就是英语学习。正是不断的练习使得学习者能积累足够的语法知识、词汇和流畅的口语。事实上,很多聪明的人们都已经意识到做行动者而非旁观者的重要性。
作为一名大学生,我相信年轻人很有必要拒绝只作旁观者。牢记:只作旁观者永远有成效。因此,我们应该鼓励自己的朋友和同学们立即行动起来实现梦想。
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to express your thanks to your parents or any family member upon making a memorable achievement. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
【试题解析】审题时,务必关注“体裁、话题、内容要求”。只要肯仔细看题,即可发现:体裁要求为“letter”,内容要求为“express your thanks to your parents or any family member upon making a memorable achievement”。因此,写作话题为感谢信,重点围绕题干中“名、动、形、副”四种词展开写作即可保证作文不跑题。
【写作提纲】
首段:写信目的,并致谢
中间段:写难忘的一次成功(如英语比赛、英语考试好成绩)
尾段:再次致谢并祝愿
【参考范文】
Dear Parents,
Today, I am writing this letter to express my thanks to you, because I made a memorable achievement in recent English Speech Competition.
During my high school study, I had a variety of difficulties in English learning. For instance, I had great trouble in memorizing new words. In addition, it was also difficult for me to understand rules of English grammar. Though I could write and read, I could not express myself freely in oral English. Then, you encouraged me to participate in the English Club. Gradually, I am convinced that practice makes perfect. It was constant practice that enabled me to build up adequate knowledge, skills and competence in making speeches in English. Finally, I succeeded in this competition. Your encouragement brought me power, aroused my enthusiasm for English and helpd me to make progress every day.
As your child, I deem that suppose I intend to achieve greater success in future, it is advisable for me to set a greater goal. You make me believe that if I try my utmost to do everything, the future of my life will be hopeful and promising. Thanks again, my dear parents!
Yours Kid
Sky
【参考译文】
亲爱的父母:
今天,我写这封信想要表达对你们的感谢,因为在最近的英语演讲比赛中我取得了令人难忘的好成绩。
在我高中学习期间,在英语学习中我遭遇过各种困难。例如,我在背单词方面有困难。此外,我也很难理解语法的规则。尽管我能读能写,但是我无法用英语口头流利表达。然后,你们鼓励我参加英语聚乐部。逐渐,我相信熟能生巧。正是不断的练习使得我积累了足够的英语演讲方面的知识、技能和能力。最终,我在这次比赛中取得了成功。你们的鼓励带给我力量,唤起我对英语的热爱并帮助我每天取得进步。
作为你们的孩子,我认为如果我想在未来取得更大的成功,我就应该设定更大的目标。 你们让我相信如果我尽最大努力去做每件事,未来的生活将充满希望一片光明。再次谢谢亲爱的爸妈!
您们的孩子
Sky
不放弃任何一次学习进步的机会
你将最终取得理想的成功
Never give up any opportunity of making progress in study,
you will eventually succeed