读后续写微技能:八步写作法

读后续写首先需要找出文章到底提出了什么冲突或问题,然后按照以下“八步”开始续写,轻松确定框架,高分唾手可得。

注意:这八步并不是固定的,可以不按这个顺序,也可以省略一些环节。

八步成文

1. 情绪:情绪描写 & 2. 细节:进一步解释描写

看到直升飞机,Jane高兴地笑了起来。

(1)At the sight of the helicopter,Jane beamed with wild joy.

(2)Seeing the helicopter,Jane beamed with wild joy.

(3)The moment she caught sight of the helicopter,Jane's eays/face lit up with delight.

(4)The moment she caught sight of the helicopter,a bright smile lit up Jane's faceleyes.

3. 转折:个人努力或借助外界

4. 转机:事情似乎有了转机,并抱有希望,感到欣慰

5. 失望:但是问题还未解决或出现了新问题

6. 想法:突然有了一个想法(一句话说明这个想法)

(1)It suddenly occurred to sb that+从句-It hit sb that+从句

-lt struck sb that+从句-It dawned on sb that+从句

(2)(idea,thought..)occurred/came to sb=..came/flashed into one's mind-...crowded in one's mind

(3)one's mind began to race

7. 结局:过段时间,事情有了最后的转折

8. 总结:点题,呼应前文

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