英语书信类书面表达写作秘籍
今天,这里以建议信为例,给大家具体讲一下怎么写好此类作文。
任务呈现
假设你叫李欣,是美国中学生Robert的笔友,你收到了他的电子邮件。请根据他邮件的内容写一封不少于60词的回信。针对他的问题,谈谈你的看法,同时提出一些建议,告诉他应该怎么做。
Dear Li Xin,
I have a problem. I don't know whom I can ask for, so I'm trying to write to you. I like to play computer games, but my parents got angry. They said I spent too much time on it and they wouldn't let me play any more. I can't understand them and I feel so bad.What should I do?Do you have any ideas?I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Robert
审题谋篇
写作目的:回信提建议
写作要点:谈看法,提建议
分段:至少两段
人称:二人称为主
时态:现在时为主
可用句型
1.You can/should...
2.You'd beter...
3. How about...
4.It is good for you to do...
5. Why don't you...
过渡词(组)
At the beginning of/First of all...
Besides...
Then/Next...
In the end/ At last/ Finally...
看完以上的审题立意和需要的词组后,一起跟着麻老师学习写一封回信吧,你会学到写建议信的结构、思路以及常用的词组搭配,让你的作文稳拿高分!
范文赏析
Dear Robert,
Thanks for your last letter and I'm sorry fo hear that you have problems with your parents.
Computer games are interesting so I can understand you. But I don't think it is right for you to spend too much time on it and maybe what your parents did is good for you.Anyway, don't be sad and I can give you some advice.
First of all, you'd better have a talk with your parents and I am sure you will understand each other. After all, they are the ones who love you most. Besides, you must put your time in good use.Always remember that study comes first. If you do well in your study, I believe your parents will allow you to play the computer. In the end, I think it is good for you to take up some other hobbies, such as reading, running or swimming. They are good for both your health and your mind.
Here is my advice for you. I hope it can help you to solve your problems. I am looking forward fo your reply.
Goodluck.
Yours,
LiXin