读后续写提分技巧(十二)——宾语从句助力读后续写
巧用宾语从句的直接引语,让读者感受现场气氛,语言描述更鲜明生动,更能表达人物的内心世界,流露出人物的真实情感。所以,适时可以把宾语从句的间接引语改为直接引语。
1. The shopkeeper said with a smile, “For us these are shells, but for the boy they are treasures. His love for his sisteris the most precious.” (2021·汕头质检) 店员说这番话的同时,内心也感受到了哥哥对妹妹的爱。
2. “Indeed, I will.” replied John, and he kept his word. (2020年新高考全国Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷)这里可体现出John坚定的信念。
3. “Hey, get in the car, quickly!” yelled Paul. (2017年6月浙江卷) “大叫”能使读者感受到当时现场情况急迫和紧张的气氛。
4. “Thanks a million! I would have died without you.” Mac turned to Pauland Becky. (2017年11月浙江卷)“万分感谢!没有你,我活不成。”直白的引语,流露出当时Mac的真实情感。
巧用宾语从句能进一步丰富谓语动词的所要表达的内涵。
1. They wondered what had happened to Patrick. 通过宾语从句可表达出他们想知道的具体事情:到底Patrick发生什么事?(2021·武汉3月质检)
2. She said that she would improveher life by her own efforts and would no longer do anything illegal again. (2021·广东模拟一) “that”引导宾语从句,引出其表明决心,改过自新的句子,同时也丰富了语言内容。
3. He thought a quick rest could give him more energy, so itwas…(2021·佛山1月质检) 他在考虑什么?用了宾语从句能更详尽表达出其想法,他认为短暂的休憩精力更好。
4. So he grabbed his bat before realizing it was just a stray dog. 他意识到什么?原来是一条流浪狗。
5. Mom realized that she had left it behind in the last hotel.
妈妈想到东西落在了酒店里。如果没有用到宾语从句,没能说明具体的情况。(2018年6月浙江卷)
发现规律:直接引语的结构是“'……(完整的句子),’sbsaid.”。而间接引语,由动词引导的宾语从句,可用sb+v.+that引导宾语从句(完整陈述句),丰富动词所要表达的内涵。
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