雅思口语 part2 逻辑拓展完整示范

part2 逻辑:

1 概述 who what when where

2 原因:喜欢某人..., 有好几个原因

原因1 解释1 To be specific   进一步解释或举例I mean../For example

解释2 连接词Apart from that 进一步解释或举例What I mean is that../For instance

原因 2解释1 Specifically/To be precise 进一步解释What I meant was that../Like for example

解释2连接词On top of that进一步解释或举例 What I mean by this is../Like for instance

3 感受   将来要怎么样...

part2 Describe a friend you made recently

    You should say:

    who this person is

    What he/she looks like

    How you knew him/her

    Why you talk about him/her

1 概述I’d like to talk about Cindy(who), a new friend (what)who I made last week(when) when I was shopping on the street(where).

2 原因 Well, I’d say this friend really appeals to me for a couple of reasons.

The first reason I think is that she’s of attractive appearance(原因1). Well, to be specific, she’s genuinely good-looking (解释1). I mean,her Roman nose, her jet-black hair, her smooth skin really allow her to stand out among people (进一步解释或举例) Apart from that, she’s genuinely a fashion icon(解释2). What I mean is that her clothes are quite chic, say pleated skirt, ripped jeans, cropped jeans, skinny jeans or stuff like that.(进一步解释或举例)

Showing great consideration for others is another reason that truly attracts me(原因2). How can I put it, to be precise, whenever her friends are under the weather不舒服, she tends to take good care of them(解释1). Like for example, yesterday, her friend Lily had a bad cold and a runny nose, Cindy bought some cold medicine for the sick girl which really touched Lily.(进一步解释或举例)  On top of that, she’s quite a good listener, if her parents feel really down(解释2). Like for instance, a couple of days ago, her mum had been fired and she listened to her mum for ages. You know, when her mother was complaining, Cindy always kept an eye contact with her mum and gave a hug from time to time, which, to a large extent, comforted her mother.  (进一步解释或举例)

3 感受So really, I do reckon that it’s worth making such a friend, and I guess I will (将来要怎么样)take a page from her from loads of aspects, from her appearance to her personality.

part2 Describe a neighbour

You should say:

who this person is

where you know this person

how you know this person

why you talk about this person

1 概述 I’d like to talk about Cindy(who), a neighbour(what) who I got to know a decade ago (when)when I was taking a lift in the apartment block(where).

2 原因 Well, I’d say this neighbour really appeals to me for a couple of reasons.

The first reason I think is that she’s of attractive appearance(原因1). Well, to be specific, she has a good-looking face(解释1). I mean,her Roman nose, her jet-black hair, her smooth skin really allow her to stand out among people(进一步解释或举例) Apart from that, she’s genuinely a fashion icon(解释2). What I mean is that her clothes are quite chic, say pleated skirt, ripped jeans, cropped jeans, skinny jeans or stuff like that(进一步解释或举例)

Showing great consideration for others is another reason that truly attracts me(原因2). How can I put it, to be precise, whenever the people living next door are under the weather不舒服, she tends to take good care of them(解释1). Like for example, yesterday, our neighbour Lily had a bad cold and a runny nose, Cindy bought some cold medicine for the sick girl which really touched Lily(进一步解释或举例)  On top of that, she’s quite a good listener, if any neighbour feels really down(解释2). Like for instance, a couple of days ago, a woman living opposite had been fired and she listened to the neighbour for ages. You know, when the woman was complaining, Cindy always kept an eye contact with her and gave a hug from time to time, which, to a large extent, comforted this neighbour (进一步解释或举例)

3 感受So really, I do reckon that it’s worth having such a neighbour, and I guess will (将来要怎么样)take a page from her from loads of aspects, from her appearance to her personality.

人物地点物品逻辑一模一样;事件稍有不同,只是把原因一,原因二换成了起初,然后~ 这是一个7分水平的逻辑架构,7.5及8分水准只需要在其基础上加上更多时态,及句式变换~

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