六级参考范文+估分建议
请对照范文估分,写到创新(创造发明)均为切题,还应提到措施;感觉和范文差距不大10+,有小错误7-9分;一塌糊涂5分左右。
六级作文的三个话题“创新、创造和发明”在@袁雨斌老师 的六级写作和我昨晚的点睛课都讲了,尤其是“创新”的那篇更是在冲刺课上直接命中!
但你仔细审题了吗?
不仅要写到“创新创造和发明”的重要性,比如现代科技产品就是现实生活中“创新创造发明”的体现,
也要提出措施去鼓励“创新创造发明”这种优秀品行,比如学校应该鼓励学生批判性思维,汲取传统智慧并创造新发明,国家保护鼓励奖励创新创造等!
可以说六级话题充分体现出题人的“心机”,再次将“科技与现代生活”与“优秀品质”两大话题融合在一起!
此外,根据往年阅卷经验:作文无须写题目,不写例子不扣分
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on innovation. Your essay should include the importance of innovation and measures to be taken to encourage innovation. You are required to write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
题目要求写一篇“essay”,即“文章”。话题关键信息为“the importance of innovation and measures to be taken to encourage innovation”,包含两点关键信息,即:创新的重要性和鼓励创新的措施。考生答题时应该满足以上要求。作文未要求写题目,因此题目可不写。
首段:引出话题
中间段:论述创新的现实体现和重要性
尾段:提出措施鼓励创新
Suppose our human society intends to acquire and enjoy long-time prosperity, it is advisable for humans to maintain their innovative minds.
Living in an era of information, we are using a variety of technological products, which are based on innovative ideas, such as digital cameras, the Internet and computers. These creative inventions bring us great convenience, arouse our enthusiasm for future life, and help our society to move forward. As a matter of fact, intelligent people in large numbers have come to realize the significance of innovation for our social development: without innovation, industries can never be modernized; without innovation, our medical science can never cure so many fatal diseases; and without innovation, there would be no electronic products we use today.
We should bear in mind that innovation is the source of social, scientific and cultural advancement. Thus, students in schools should be educated to think critically to foster their innovative awareness; scientists should be supported with financial aids to propose innovative ideas and carry out innovative researches; and of course, I, as a college student, am convinced that it is of great necessity for any other favorable measures to be taken to encourage innovation.
【注:以上范文仓促成笔,如有错误,敬请指正,不胜涕零】
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on invention. Your essay should include the importance of invention and measures to be taken to encourage invention. You are required to write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
【简析】首先,本次六级的三个话题“创新、创造和发明”本质上区别不大;因此,写作中这三个话题写相同的表达甚至作为同义词替换是没有问题的,也不会被判定为跑题。
本文体裁要求为“essay”,内容要点为“the importance of invention and measures to be taken to encourage invention”, 即:发明的重要性和鼓励发明的措施。以上两点信息应该在写作中得到体现。
Whether in history or in the contemporary society, it is a common phenomenon for people to pursue original ideas and inventions, which may lead to significant changes in social, scientific and industrial fields.
Admittedly, during the advancement of science and technology, some inventions bring us great convenience, arouse our passion for the future and help us to enjoy a wonderful life. Two typical examples can be given: the invention of the Internet shortens the distance in communication and makes the world a global village; the invention of computers has greatly changed our way of work, entertainment and study. It is these inventions that ensure our society to advance speedily and enable every individual to benefit. To conclude, if we intend to create a promising and hopeful future, it is essential for us to maintain our ability to innovate, create and invent.
Then, what measures can be taken to encourage invention? I deem that it is great necessity for the authorities to support scientists with financial aids to carry out researches for inventions, for schools to encourage students to create, and for the whole society to respect creative ideas.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on creation. Your essay should include the importance of creation and measures to be taken to encourage creation. You are required to write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
六级作文的三个话题“创新、创造和发明”意义基本一致,且出题形式也极其相似,这保证了三套写作试题在“信度、效度和难度”的一致。
本文要求写作体裁为essay, 内容要点为“the importance of creation and measures to be taken to encourage creation”,即:创造的重要性及鼓励创造的措施。”因此,写作时应该满足以上两点要求,只写一点可能会影响得分。
If one does not intends to live a tedious, repeated and boring life every day, it is advisable for him or her to try new ideas and maintain the ability to create, innovate and invent.
Creation is closely associated with the advancement of our society. Whether in history or in the contemporary society, creative ideas always bring us new experience, arouse our enthusiasm for the future and help us to enjoy a colorful life. And the importance of creation can be illustrated by numerous examples: without the creation of productivity tools, humans may still live in the primitive society and suffer hunger, various diseases and the poverty; without the creation of the Internet, can never can we enjoy the convenience of information technology. It is diverse creations in all fields that enable the whole society to progress in a dynamic manner.
Thus, I, as a college student, am convinced that it is of great necessity for schools to foster students’ awareness of creation in daily study, and for the government to support scientists with financial aids to conduct their creative researches. We should bear in mind that creation leads to a promising and hopeful future.
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好运就会到来