2015年6月六级写作真题解析2:好奇心的重要性(超精细详解)
2015年6月六级写作真题解析2:好奇心的重要性
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on Albert Einstein’s remark “I have no special talents, I am only passionately curious.” You can cite one example or two to illustrate your point of view. You should write at least 150 but no more than 200 words.
【简析】
本次所考作文延续全英文命题形式,体裁要求为essay, 内容要求为:1)评论话语“I have no special talents, I am only passionately curious.”2)举一个或两个例子证明观点。话语关键词为“special talents, passionately curious”,审题阶段,经过词性转化或同义词,可以衍生出distinctive, talented, gifts, ability, passion, curiosity等扩展词汇用于写作。
范文
Suppose individuals are not so talented but they intend to succeed, it is advisable for them to have passion and curiosity. Accordingly, when hearing Einstein’s remark “I have no special talents, I am only passionately curious” we can perceive its connotation. Apparently, this saying can be naturally associated with the significance of curiosity.
In our daily life, it is a common phenomenon for people to regard talents as the key to success in various fields. However, an increasing number of wise men find it more important to have curiosity, if they have no distinctive gifts. Two typical examples can be given: if students have no better ability in study, their curiosity helps them to acquire knowledge; if scientists have no talents in invention, their curiosity helps them to create and innovate. It is curiosity that enables them to build up adequate inspiration, power and motivation to pursue and explore. As a matter of fact, intelligent people in large numbers have come to realize the importance of curiosity.
As a college student, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for youngsters to maintain and enhance their curiosity for unknown things. Thus, teachers and parents should educate, advocate and encourage their teenagers to cultivate this awareness. Do bear in mind: being passionately curious leads to success.(216 words)
读而思
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【译文】
假如人们没有特殊的才能但依然想成功,拥有激情和好奇心是必要的。因此,当听到爱因斯坦的评论“我没有特殊的才能,只有热烈的好奇心”时,我们能理解它的内涵。显然,这句话使我们自然联系到好奇心的重要性。
日常生活中,人们普遍认为天赋是诸多领域成功的关键。然而,越来越多明智者发现如果他们没有出众的天赋,有好奇心更加重要。两个典型例子如下:如果学生学习方面没有较好的能力,他们的好奇心帮助他们获取知识;如果科学家没有发明的才能,好奇心帮助他们创造革新。正是好奇心使得他们积累起足够的灵感、力量和动力去追求探索。事实上,很多聪明人都已经意识到好奇心的重要性。
作为一名大学生,我相信年轻人很有必要维持并提升自己对未知事物的好奇心。因此,教师和家长应该教育、倡导和鼓励青少年培养这种意识。牢记:热烈的好奇心让人成功。
范文分析
首段首句改写话语并直接阐述其内涵,二句进而引出作文所给话语,最后一句简单总结话语含义并引出第二段内容。
二段首句阐述人们对于talents的普遍看法;二句转折并指出明智者对于好奇心重要新的看法;三句通过排比并联系现实生活中学生和科学家举例;四句使用强调句式阐述好奇心的意义;尾句总结第二段内容。
尾段首句联系自身并阐述观点,二句提出建议,最后发出号召。