【二轮复习·书面表达】如何写好建议信?
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文体概述
建议信是向别人提出合理的建议,让对方接受自己的想法、主张,解决有关问题的一类信件。建议信不是投诉信,观点要合情合理,注意礼貌当先。同时,建议信要简洁明确、理由充足,具有合理性和说服力,内容通常包括:
常用语块
1.给某人提建议 give sb some advice (on)
2. 在做某事时遇到困难 have difficulty/trouble (in) doing sth
3. 利用 make use of
4. 向某人征求意见 ask sb for advice
5. 制订计划 make a plan
6. 有了某人的共同努力 with the joint efforts of sb
7. 听从某人的建议 follow one’s advice
8.把……考虑在内 take sth intoaccount/consideration
9. 帮助你加深对……的理解 help you develop a deeper understanding of…
10. 向某人寻求帮助 turn to sb for help
11. 首先你要做的是…… the first thing you need to do is that…
套用句式
1. 很高兴收到你的来信,征求我对……的建议。
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on…
2. 你就……向我寻求建议,我会尽力提一些建设性的建议。
You haveasked me for my advice with regard to…and I will try to make some constructive suggestions.
3. 我觉得如果能够……将会很有帮助。
I feel that it would be beneficial if…
4. 我希望这些建议会对你有所帮助。
I hope you will find these suggestions helpful/useful.
5. 我相信你会考虑我的建议的。
I believe you’ll take my suggestion into account./I believe you’ll take good consideration of my suggestion.
经典范文
Dear Roy,
I am glad toreceive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
Here are a fewsuggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be ableto learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it alsohelps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese wheneverpossible.
Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinesesongs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily.You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about Chinaand help you learn Chinese.
Try and write tome in Chinese next time.
Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
练习1
假设你是李华,你班英国交换生Jim想参加外国友人举办的“点赞中国”活动,向你求助:如何能更好地认识中国。请你给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1. 建议他做一件事;
2. 说明理由;
3. 表达愿望。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:点赞中国 Thumbs-up for China
Dear Jim,
Delighted to learn that you are going to participate in theactivity “Thumbs-up for China”, I am more than willing to give you some advice.
I would like tosuggest that you take the “Fuxing” bullet train,which travels at a speed of about 350 kilometers per hour. I’m sure you’ll geta clear idea of what high technology brings to China.
Besides, you can enjoy the beautiful scenery along the way.This experience will help you develop a deeper understanding of China and I dohope you can share your impression with the people around you.
Hope my advicecan be of some help. If there is anything else I could do, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
练习2
假定你是李华,你的英语笔友Steven和同学因小事发生争执,关系闹僵了,他来信向你请教如何与同学和睦相处,请根据以下要点写一封回信。
1. 表示安慰;
2. 如何解决该矛盾;
3. 如何与同学和睦相处。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Steven,
I hope you don’t feel very sad and angry after having aconflict with your classmates. And I’m really glad to receive your letterasking for my advice on how to get along with your classmates.
The first thingyou need to do is that you should calm down and communicate with yourclassmates to clear up the misunderstanding between you.
Regarding to getting along well with your classmates, youshould be kind and friendly to them. What’s more, you’d better learn to controlyour emotion. In my opinion, if you put yourself in others’ position, you wouldunderstand them better.
I hope the adviceabove will be helpful to you and wish you a happier time at school.
Yours,
Li Hua