一篇文章给你讲明白写作句式多样化

文/王丹

修改学生作文的时候，发现会有一个通病，就是写的句子中都很喜欢用成 “我” 怎么怎么，“我” 怎么怎么，或者people怎么怎么，people怎么怎么。会觉得句式很单一。那么如何提高自己的句式表达，使其更加多样化呢？

今天就介绍一下句式多样化方法之一：物作主语

用物作主语，句子会自然变成被动语态，或者it作形式主语的句式；再有，物作主语时，谓语动词也会多样化起来。是不是很抽象，来，上句子，下面的片段是来自学生的作文练习。

从这篇习作可以明显发现作文句式的问题就是，people do sth.这样的句式太多，显得句式单一，不够丰富。那么如何用物作主语丰富句式呢？我们来看几个例子。

1.Now we have a mature economy system, more and more people have great life condition, they are not only have enough food to eat but also have some money to do some amusement. （by 薛同学）

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Now as economy has progressed and developed maturely,life condition is improved tremendously, which means there are not only enough food to eat but also much money to amuse oneself.

2.We can see this in on aspect of children can learn life wisdom from different animals. To be more specific, children can learn the importance of cooperation from monkeies; they can also learn the leadership of lions and they can also learn unremitting spirit from camels.（by 于同学）

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Childrencan be inspired with life wisdom by observing different animals. To be more specific, children can learn the importance of cooperation from monkeys; lionscan display his leadership to us; and the tolerance and perseverance of camel can motivate children to adhere to their goals and never give up when confronting with difficulties and obstacles.

3. When we establish a solid friendship, we will have less misunderstandings. （by 曾同学）

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Once a solid friendship is established, fewer misunderstandings will occur due to long time interaction between each other.

好，下面看一篇文章，想想如果是你，会怎么修改呢？修改后的文章会在下期推送。