【试试这样说】9-12月雅思考官突然超有追求?
听说每个高分烤鸭都星标了新航道3分钟学雅思
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【本篇内容适合目标分数为6.5分的备考学生】
新的9月,新的开始!
踏着前辈们的身躯,我们迎来了换题月。
除了被问到'Describe a line (or a few words) that you remember from a poem or song'这种富有灵性的话题之外,当考官问你'Describe a ambition that you have had for a long time'时,可能大部分的同学会脱口而出:和雅思分手!!!!
“听力搞rap,我们就烤你”
当然啦,这也就是广大群众内心os深处的咆哮罢了~
作为part 2 的题目,多背范文其实并不是一个好的选择:因为从考官的角度来看,有趣且有逻辑的storyline故事情节反而是最抓人且最有力的得分利器。
那么让我们来看一下这个“追求”是怎么样的“追求”
Describe a ambition that you have had for a long time
You should say
What it is
What you did for it
When you can achieve it
And explain why you have this ambition.
作为一个经验类型的话题,同学们已经拥有一个特别好的“小捷径”-Scholarship奖学金。那么,既然是小捷径,那么这个话题肯定是一定意义上的“老生常谈”啦。那么一个有新意的内容展开方式,才能成功的细化内容并且让考官印象深刻从而给你一个不错的分数呢?
How to achieve a scholarship?(这不是相当于在说What you did for it 嘛~)
- perform well in the university
这么说
The most fundamental requirement for gaining this year’s scholarship is to perform well in the university,getting the best final grade and average performance in my school last year.
奖学金的最基本要求是在大学中表现良好,获得系里最好的成绩和平均绩效
How to work hard in the university?(这里在说good performance的内容哦)
- Good GPA (ex. 3.5)
这么说
If I wanna get a good GPA, like 3.5, those taken Tests, submitted papers,given oral presentations, and course attendance are indispensable parts in semesters. So last year, I spent a very hard learning time for the 3.5. Not only that, the overall performance would be judged by administration office on campus: the waiting time made me very anxious.
如果我想获得良好的GPA(例如3.5),那么参加考试,提交论文,进行口头陈述和出勤率是学期中不可或缺的部分。因此,去年,我花了很长时间学习为了得到3.5的GPA。不仅如此,整体表现将由校园内的行政办公室来评估,因而评估的等待时间让我非常焦虑。
- Get more involved in school activities, like sport league games
这么说
Besides, to be an excellent student, it is necessary to not only get good grade at school, but also own social ability in the community of campus. So in last year, I have participated in sport league games: I have played basketball for several years so that I helped our faculty to get an splendid result. Such kind of soft power is very advantageous in the scholarship selection.
此外,要成为一名优秀到足以竞争奖学金的学生,不仅要在学校取得良好的成绩,还必须在校园有良好的的社交能力。因此,去年,我参加了体育联赛:我打篮球已经有几年了,所以我帮助我们的学院取得了出色的成绩。这种软实力在奖学金选择中非常有优势。
Why you have this ambition?
- Amount à attractive
这么说
Since the amount of prize was quite considerable, which was 10,000 RMB. If I had the chance, I might use it for travelling to travel abroad, like European countries. By such visit, I’m able to enrich my experience, open my views, and make more friends.
因为奖金相当可观,所以是10,000元人民币。如果有机会,我可能会用它来旅行,例如欧洲国家出国旅行。通过这样的访问,我可以丰富我的经验,打开我的视野并结识更多朋友。
这样的话,同学们知道怎样去表达自己的“追求”了嘛~~~