四级写作真题之一：校园活动
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay about a campus activity that has benefited you most. You should state the reasons and write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
试题解析：
2014年6月和12月两次四级作文的共同特点是“半开放性”，即题目规定了“campus activity”，但考生可以自由选择具体话题。可以看出，传统所谓“观点对比、问题解决、现象意义”等老套的应考方式没有被采纳，体现四、六级考委会与时俱进和反押题的思想。
事实上，考生需要牢记：无需将作文强制分成若干种类型。审好题，然后按题目要求写相应的内容是不跑题的关键。本文话题关键词为：campus activity, benefited, you, most；考生可以从现象、意义、观点等功能角度说明主题。
On many campuses, it has become a trend for a host of students to participate in various activities. Meanwhile, an increasing numbers of youngsters find it quite beneficial and rewarding to be involved in some positive activities.
A case in point is English Club where the activity of learning benefited me most. In contemporary world, English learning has gained great popularity, and it is of great significance for college students to learn English well. However, I have had a variety of difficulties in study. For instance, I had trouble memorizing words. Sometimes, it was also difficult for me to understand the rules of grammar. Although I could read and write, I could not express myself freely in English.
Then, how to get a good command of this language for me? I am convinced that practice makes perfect and activities in English Club help me a lot. In English Club, daily practice enables me to speak and write fluently. It is also through constant practice that I can master the rules of grammar and remember words. I will bear in mind: if I try our utmost to practice every day, the future of our learning will be promising. (197words)
在大学校园中，很多学生参加各种活动已经成为一种趋势。同时，越来越多年轻人发现参与到一些积极活动中有诸多好处和回报。
一个典型例子就是英语学习俱乐部的学习活动最使我受益。当今世界，英语学习颇受欢迎，大学生学好英语很重要。但是，我在学习中曾经有各种困难。例如，我背单词有麻烦。有时候，我也难以理解语法规则。尽管我能写能读，但无法用英语流利表达。
然后，我是怎么掌握这门语言的？我相信熟能生巧，英语俱乐部的活动帮我很大忙。在俱乐部，日常的练习使得我能流利说和写。也正是通过练习，我掌握了语法规则同时记住单词。我将牢记：如果我尽力每天练习，未来的学习将很有希望。
大学英语四级考试的作文，写英语学习活动使我受益最大，接地气的同时必然符合题目的要求。值得一提的是，范文中诸多表达源自于本人在四级辅导课堂必讲的基础背诵作文。首段从关键词campus, activity和benefited 入手写现象和感受。二段以举例方式引入英语俱乐部的学习活动，二段重点描述学英语中曾经遇到的困难。尾段写学习活动带给我的好处，使用了I am convinced that.../ 强调句式等表达。
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