重磅首解刚刚测试读后续写（2022届高三8月金太阳新高考区联考试卷）

试卷及读后续写作答老师：郑州西亚斯学院  付福玲   审核：洪亮英语

第二节（满分25分）

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

I had moved toArizona about two weeks before the start of my junior year of high school, sonot only was this a new school for me, but also a new state and I did not know anyone.

On the first dayof school at lunch after getting my meal, I sat down at a table in the courtyard.As I began to eat, I looked around at the other tables and saw another girlsitting alone, so I decided to go and sit with her. Anyway, there was no reasonfor me to have a whole table to myself, and who knew maybe I could make afriend. I walked to check and said, “Excuse me, do you mind if I sit with you?”She was surprised at first, but then smiled and said, “No, I don’t!”

We hit it offimmediately and became close friends throughout the next two years. Towards theend of our senior year, she told me that she had been accepted to anout-of-state college and would be moving away after graduation. I was sad thatI would miss her but at the same time was really happy for her.

She then sharedwith me something very moving. “Do you remember the first day of school whenyou came over and sat down with me during lunch? ” she asked. “Of course! Why doyou ask? ” I replied.

She continued,“I want to let you know how special you are and that you make a difference. Iwas severely depressed that day, because something unhappy had happened to methat morning. I had been being sad since the morning and nobody realized mysadness. It had just broken me down. If you hadn’t appeared, I would beprobably in deep sadness for a long time after I got home from school.”

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Then, she toldme something more I hadn’t known before. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Both of usgained a lot from the incident. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

题型分析：这篇文章是个记叙文。故事发生在作者因为搬家而转校后的第一天的午餐时间。由于刚刚到一个新的学校，作者独自一人就餐。此时，她发现另一个桌子上另一个女生也是独自一人。因此，作者就加入到了这个女生行列并和她成了好友。毕业前期，这位朋友给作者讲述了当初那一天对她来说的重要意义。本篇续写要求学生对女孩子当天遇到的不开心的事情以及两者在这段友谊中的共同成长与进步。这种场景在高中生的生活中还是非常常见的。续写内容比较容易构思，但是，续写一个既合情合理又和原文有很好的契合度的文章却有一定的难度。

【名师点评】本文续写中，从一个看似非常小的事件入手。但却精确地描述了高中生那种敏感又细腻的情感。①句巧妙地使女孩以前的最好的朋友和作者的经历联系在一起——一个转学离开，一个转学过来。②句连续用了三个形容词“depressed”、“disappointed”、“offended”表达了女孩极度失望的情绪，与原文“severely depressed”和“It had just broken me down”相呼应；紧接着使用“for”引导的并列句及which引导表示明喻的非限制性定语从句等句式，更容易引起读者的共鸣。③句使用倒装句体现了动作描写的节奏感。④用一个强调句体现场景描写的画面感，同时与第二段续写无缝对接。⑤句虽然结构非常简单，但是运用了反复修辞方法her determination, her diligence and her persistence，显示出了很好的词汇功底。⑥句是点睛之笔，与段首句呼应，表明好的友谊可以使双方共同成长。