读后续写高分素材积累,这样写环境瞬间高大上

读后续写基本以记叙文为主,记叙文是以记人叙事为主要内容,以叙述为主要表达方式来反映丰富多彩的现实生活的一种文体。

环境描写是记叙文的要素之一,指对人物所处的具体的社会环境和自然环境的描写。其中,社会环境是指能反映社会、时代特征的建筑、场所、陈设等景物以及民俗民风等。自然环境是指自然界的景物,如季节变化、风霜雨雪、山川湖海、森林原野等。

我们先看看英语名著是怎么描写环境的:

Now that the sun was setting in a welter of crimson behind the hills across the Flint River, the warmth of the April day was ebbing into a faint but balmy chill.
因为太阳在弗林特河对岸的群山后面一起汹涌的红霞中缓缓降落,四月白天的温暖也渐渐消退,隐隐透出丝丝的凉意。
——Gone With The Wind
《飘》

Cecilia, mercifully still in her underwear, was climbing into the pond, was standing waist deep in the water, was pinching her nose.

谢天谢地,塞西莉亚还穿着内衣,爬进池塘,站在齐腰深的水里,捏着鼻子。

—— Atonement

《赎罪》

Some days the sunsets would be purple and pink. And some days they were a blazing orange setting fire to the clouds on the horizon. It was during one of those sunsets that my father's idea of the whole being greater than the sum of its parts moved from my head to my heart.

有时落日泛起紫红的余晖,有时散发出橘红色的火光燃起天边的晚霞。在这绚烂的日落景象中,我慢慢领悟了父亲所说的整体胜于局部总和的道理。

—— Flipped

《怦然心动》

下面,小维为大家整理了环境描写相关的素材,同学们练习的时候,可以先试着翻译,再和例句对比,找出例句中精彩的结构和词汇,最后熟诵下来

环境描写基本词汇
江河湖海

stream, mouth, bank, branch, pond, lake, ocean, wave,bay, beach, shore (ashore), seaside,sand, coast (coastline), port, island, source(课标新增词)

harbour, strait, waterfall, wetland, dam, polar(课标新增词)

山地沙漠

forest, continent, mountain ( mountainous), range, peak(课标新增词), face, rock, cave, valley, soil, field,plain, desert,mountainside, hillside, downhill, highland, jungle, steep

环境描写的adj要求:有声,有色,有质感,有味道
the blue sky
蓝天
the green grass
青草
the songs of birds
鸟鸣

the fragile flowers

娇嫩的花

the fragrant roses

芬芳的玫瑰

a rainy season
多雨的季节
a stormy night
暴风雨之夜
a timely/seasonable rain
及时雨,好雨
continuous/ constant rains
连绵不断的雨

the thundering clouds

雷霆万钧的云

cool,refreshing breeze

凉爽清新的风

the setting/ rising sun
落日/ 冉冉升起的太阳
in the warm spring sunshine
在春天温暖的阳光里
under the burning sun of midsummer
在盛夏灼热的阳光下
in the blinding rain
在茫茫大雨中
fierce /heavy/ violent storms
狂风暴雨

The sky, midnight blue, gave the scene a fairytale quality.

深蓝色的夜空给这一场景增添了童话般的色彩。

We climbed up a winding track towards a mountain shelter.
我们沿着一条蜿蜒的小道爬向山上的一处避难所。

The water was deep blue and the sunlight glittered on its glass-clear surface.

湖水深蓝,阳光在波平如镜的湖面上熠熠生辉。

On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song.

山中宁静的清晨,感受阳光洒在你的身上,呼吸鲜花的芳香,(聆听)鸟儿用它们的晨歌迎接新的一天。(新人教必修②U4)

环境描写的verb (vi&vt)要求
clear up
放晴
be buried in snow
深埋在雪中
bathe in (the) sunshine
沐日光浴
Bathed in the sunshine and delighted by fantastic scenery, we headed for the destination.
沐浴在阳光下享受着美丽的风景,我们向目的地出发了。
The stars that dotted the sky lit up the night.
星星点缀着夜空,照亮了夜晚。
The sun went in, and the breeze became cold.
云层遮住了太阳,微风有了些凉意。
The mist melted rapidly in the morning sun.
在早晨的阳光下,薄雾涣然消散了。
A clear little stream ran quite merrily along its narrow way.
一条清澈的小溪沿着狭窄的小路欢快地流淌着。
Mist-covered mountains were dotted with small farms and villages.
雾蒙蒙的山上星星点点地散落着小农场和村落。
The roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast.
海浪的咆哮和海鸟的鸣叫组成了海岸的音乐。(新人教必修②U4)
The clouds had spread and nearly covered the entire sky.
云层散开,几乎遮住了整个天空。
The feathery snowflakes danced in the night air, making a beautiful picture.
鹅毛般的雪花在夜空中飞舞,构成了一幅美丽的画卷。
The rain drummed on the window, bidding farewell to the last beam of sunlight.
雨滴敲打着窗户,向最后一缕阳光告别。
As the night advanced, the clouds closed in and densely overspread the whole sky.
夜色渐深,乌云密布,笼罩了整个天空。
Though the rain stopped, the wind rushed by and whistled and made strange sounds.
雨虽停了,风却呼啸而过,发出奇怪的声音。(选自《秘密花园》)
The new spring grass shot up as time itself had sped up.
随着时间的脚步加快,新的春草拔地而起。
The birds busy themselves around me, not caring that I'm there.
鸟儿们在我周围忙碌着,并不介意我在那儿。
Falling leaves danced down in the cool mid-autumn air, bidding farewell to sweet summer and welcoming the autumn in.
落叶在秋风中飞舞,告别了甜美的夏天,迎接秋天的到来。
The leaves crunched beneath my feet as I strolled down the street. Occasionally, one would fall past me, lightly swaying as the air gently carried it to the ground.
漫步街头,树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响。偶尔,有叶子会从我身边掉落,在微风中轻轻摇摆,飘然落地。
本文内容节选自《高考总复习全效新方略》
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