读后续写高分素材积累,这样写环境瞬间高大上
读后续写基本以记叙文为主,记叙文是以记人叙事为主要内容,以叙述为主要表达方式来反映丰富多彩的现实生活的一种文体。
环境描写是记叙文的要素之一,指对人物所处的具体的社会环境和自然环境的描写。其中,社会环境是指能反映社会、时代特征的建筑、场所、陈设等景物以及民俗民风等。自然环境是指自然界的景物,如季节变化、风霜雨雪、山川湖海、森林原野等。
我们先看看英语名著是怎么描写环境的:
Cecilia, mercifully still in her underwear, was climbing into the pond, was standing waist deep in the water, was pinching her nose.
谢天谢地,塞西莉亚还穿着内衣,爬进池塘,站在齐腰深的水里,捏着鼻子。
—— Atonement
《赎罪》
Some days the sunsets would be purple and pink. And some days they were a blazing orange setting fire to the clouds on the horizon. It was during one of those sunsets that my father's idea of the whole being greater than the sum of its parts moved from my head to my heart.
有时落日泛起紫红的余晖,有时散发出橘红色的火光燃起天边的晚霞。在这绚烂的日落景象中,我慢慢领悟了父亲所说的整体胜于局部总和的道理。
—— Flipped
《怦然心动》
下面,小维为大家整理了环境描写相关的素材,同学们练习的时候,可以先试着翻译,再和例句对比,找出例句中精彩的结构和词汇,最后熟诵下来。
江河湖海
stream, mouth, bank, branch, pond, lake, ocean, wave,bay, beach, shore (ashore), seaside,sand, coast (coastline), port, island, source(课标新增词)
harbour, strait, waterfall, wetland, dam, polar(课标新增词)
山地沙漠
forest, continent, mountain ( mountainous), range, peak(课标新增词), face, rock, cave, valley, soil, field,plain, desert,mountainside, hillside, downhill, highland, jungle, steep
the fragile flowers
娇嫩的花
the fragrant roses
芬芳的玫瑰
the thundering clouds
雷霆万钧的云
cool,refreshing breeze
凉爽清新的风
The sky, midnight blue, gave the scene a fairytale quality.
深蓝色的夜空给这一场景增添了童话般的色彩。
The water was deep blue and the sunlight glittered on its glass-clear surface.
湖水深蓝,阳光在波平如镜的湖面上熠熠生辉。
On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song.
山中宁静的清晨,感受阳光洒在你的身上,呼吸鲜花的芳香,(聆听)鸟儿用它们的晨歌迎接新的一天。(新人教必修②U4)