高考英语满分作文是这样写“开头” “结尾”的,高分写信作文模板

高考英语作文“开头”“结尾”超高分模板

一. 如何写信件的开头和结尾

英语写信件的作文分为两种:一种是收到来信写回信;另一种则是直接写信。

1. 收到来信写回信的开头:

1)I’m so glad to receive your letter.

我很高兴收到你的来信。

2)I’m very pleased to hear from you.

收到你的来信我很高兴。

3)It has been a longtime since I hear from you last time.

我已经很长时间没有收到你的来信了。

4)Haven’t seen you for ages. Glad to hearfrom you.

好久不见,很高兴收到你的来信。

5)I am sorry it has taken me a long time to reply to your last letter.

很抱歉,这么久才回你的上次来信。

6)sorry to reply to your letter so late.

抱歉这么晚才给你回信。

7)From your letter, Ilearned that...

从你的信中我得知...

8)Your letter reached/ came to me thismorning/yesterday...

今天早上/昨天...我收到了你的来信。

9)There is nothing happier to me than to receive your letter.

再也没有比收到你的来信更开心的事情了。

10)I know you have trouble in...after reading your letter.

在读完你的信件之后,我知道你在...有困难。

11)I have received your letter saying you...

你的来信说道...

2. 直接写信的开头句:

1)Haven’t seen you for ages, I’m writing to you to...

好久不见,我写信是为了...

2)I’m writing to you on the purpose of...

我写信的目的是...

3)I want to give you some advice on...

我想给你一些关于...的建议。

3. 精彩的结尾句子:

1)I’m looking forward to your early reply.

期待你的回复。

2)Looking forward to your reply with the least possible delay.

希望你在方便的时候及时回复。

3) Please remember me to your wholefamily.

请带我想你的家人问好。

4) Expecting to hear from you as soon as possible.

希望尽快收到你的回复。

二、如何写建议信的开头与结尾

1. 如何写建议信的开头

1) I am glad to receive your letter asking for...

很高兴收到你的来信询问...

2)It is my pleasure to give you some suggestions on...

很高兴给你一些关于...的建议。

3) With regard to the matter you mentionedin your letter, my suggestion is...

关于你在信件中所提到的问题,我的建议是...

4) Concerning your request, I would like to offer my advice.

鉴于你的请求,我想提出我的建议。

5) I’m writing to express my views concerning...

我写信时为了表达关于...的观点。

6)I feel it would behelpful/practical/appropriate if you...

如果你...我觉得非常有用/切合实际/合适。

7)I would very much like to advise you to ...

我非常想要建议你...

8)With regard to ..., I think you should...

关于...,我认为你应该...

9)I’m sorry to hearthat you are having trouble/ difficulties in....Such problems are quiteformal.Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.

很遗憾听说你在...方面遇到了麻烦。这样的问题是很正常的。也许以下的建议慧有所帮助。

10)You have asked me formy advice with regard to how to...and I would like to share my opinions.

你问我关于如何...的建议,我很乐意和你分享我的观点。

11)When it comes to...,maybe the following suggestions can help you.

当提到...,也许以下的建议能够帮到你。

12) As far as I’m concerned, it would be wise to take the following actions.

在我看来,采取如下行动是明智的。

13) Facing these problems, I'm seized with fear and anxiety and I hope that you will be kind enough to help me.

面对这些问题,我感到十分恐惧与焦虑,希望你能帮我。

2. 如何写建议信的结尾

1)I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendationspractical/useful/helpful.

我希望这些建议是切合实际的/有用的/有帮助的。

2)I would be ready to discuss this matterwith you in further details.

我准备将和你进一步讨论这个问题。

3)Please take my advice into account/consideration and make a final decision.

请考虑我的建议并做出决定。

4)I would be more than glad if you can takemy suggestions.

如果你能采取我的建议我将非常高兴。

5)I hold the firm belief that you will make great progress as long as you insist what I have told you.

我坚信,只要你按照我的建议坚持下去,你一定会取得巨大进步的。

6)I am looking forward to hearing good newsfrom you.

期待听到你的好消息。

7)I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously.

我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。

8)If you have any question or requirement,please do not hesitate to tell me.

如果你有任何问题或者要求,请不要犹豫的告诉我。

9) If you have anything question, pleasefeel free to contract me at any time.

如果你有任何问题,请随时联系我。

0) I’m sure that any advice will be a big help to me.Your kind early reply would be greatly appreciated.

我相信你的任何建议都会帮到我。如你能及时回复,我将感激不尽。

3. 高考真题回顾

2020全国卷Ⅰ

适用地区:河北、河南、江西、广东、安徽、湖南、湖北、福建、山西

第二节  书面表达(满分25分)
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1. 人物简介;
2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。
The person I respect

There are many respectable people around us. ___
...

The person I respect

We have a lot of respectable people around us. They may be our teachers, parents or one of our elders. As for me, my father is the person I respect most. My father is a teacher who loves his work and his students very much. He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work.

When I come across the problems of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely. He achieved a lot in his work, respected by his students. So, in my mind my father is the person I respect most and I love him deeply.

2020全国卷Ⅱ

适用地区:重庆、甘肃、青海、西藏、黑龙江、吉林、辽宁、宁夏、内蒙古、新疆、陕西

第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
上周末,你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文,介绍这次活动,内容包括:
1.农场情况;
2.采摘过程;
3.个人感受。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.题目已为你写好。
题目:My Weekend
范文:

Last weekend,we took part in a picking activity. We drove from the school, and the farm was about 2 kilometers away from our school. When we arrived at the farm, there are all kinds of animals, green fresh vegetables and fruit trees in the farm. We were divided into two groups. One group was responsible for picking fruits, the other packed up the fruits. Time flying quickly, the activity was over. But it was a meaningful day, when we learn a lot form it. Through this activity, we know how hard the farmers are and how precious the food is. We should treasure the food planted by the farmers.

2020全国卷Ⅲ

适用地区:四川、广西、贵州、云南

假定你是李华,你和同学根据英语课文改编一个短剧,请你写一封邮件给外教miss Veans,请他指导你们。邮件内容包括:情节简介、指导内容、商定时间和地点。
范文:

Dear Miss Evans,

I was wondering if you could help me revise a short play adapted from our English textbook.

The plot of the tragic story is about Lady Meng jiang and her husband, who lived more than 2000 years ago in ancient China.At their  wedding,her husband was taken away forcefully to bulid the Great wall.Meng jiang went to look for her husband, only to learn of his death. Then she cried at the Great Wall,causing it to fall apart.

Could you kindly give me guidance on two aspects? First of all, could you check the language for us? Secondly, if you could please give us some  direction on our acting and use of tone?

If possible, could I meet you in your office at 10  am?

We are looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

LiHua

网络

2020北京卷

适用地区:北京

第三部分:书面表达(共两节,35分)
  第一节(15分)
  假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即,作为俱乐部负责人,你给Jim写一封电子邮件,请他推荐一名外籍指导教师,内容包括:
1. 条件及要求;
2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。
注意:
1.词数不少于50;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
------------------------------------
------------------------------------ 
------------------------------------
  Yours,
  Li Hua
  第二节(20分)
  假设你是红星中学高三(1)班班长李华。居家学习期间,你们班开展了一次以“自律”为主题的调研活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文稿件,给你们学校英文网站投稿,记述你在本次活动中发现问题并解决问题的过程。
  注意:词数不少于60。
  提示词:自律self-discipline
(请务必将作文写在答题卡指定区域内)
范文

This unusual term witnessed a swift heart-shaking growth in our self-discipline,which was, is and will always be leaving a significant influence on our development.

With the unexpected COID-19 threatening our health and safety continuously,staying indoors and working online is a must-take defensive measure.We senior 3 students are just among those, who have no other choice but to manage ourselves at home by learning on the Internet.However, one day ,a survey came ,which showed an awful result that most of us had not made full use of this kind of resources,wasting much time playing online games or paying no carefulness to the required lessons.Immediately,being the monitor of our class, I frowned with endless anxiety.At dinner,a talk took place in my family,where my considerate father and mother put forward practical suggestions.With the purpose of strengthening self-discipline awareness together,I organized an online classmeeting ,stating a series of advice ,calling on everyone to improve our self-discipline and ending up with a regular rule.Finally came the time when three months flew away.A new survey showing our progress excited me greatly,with the result that I called my headteacher,telling him our long-expected achievements.Meanwhile,delight mixed with bits of satisfaction surged into his heart and mine.

It is owing to this special period that we have grown up rapidly.Nothing is impossible if we are determined enough to control ourselves and build self-discipline in any situation.

2020天津卷

适用地区:天津

书信:介绍成人礼。1.回顾成长历程;2.观看校友抗疫视频;3.自己的感受和未来期望。
‘’成人礼“特定表达:

1、成人礼:coming-of-age ceremony

2、Our ceremony fell on May 16.      fall on 在某一天举行

3、 In China the age of 18 means we have grown up.    不能用18 years old 做主语

4、During the ceremony, dressed in Hanfu, a traditional dress (costume)of Han Chinese people, we performed/observed a series of rituals.  注意“穿着汉服”“行礼”的表达。

5、We got down on our knees/knelt down on the ground to our parents to express our thanks to them for raising us and bringing us up. 注意“下跪 ”的表达。

6、We owe so many thanks to our parents.  owe sth. to sb. “欠,欠恩、欠情”

7、The ceremony is intended to make us understand the meaning ofmaturity and responsibility.   be intended to do 旨在

素材

成人礼coming-of-age ceremony是在少男少女年龄满18岁时举行的象征迈向成人阶段的仪式,它标志着告别孩童时代(childhood),进入成年期(adulthood)。在成人礼上,通常都要进行成年宣誓(take an oath to adulthood)。在中国一些地方,成人礼上还流行穿汉服(traditional Han costumes),祭拜孔子(consecrate Confucius)等习俗。

coming-of-age ceremony就是成人礼,是在少男少女年纪满18岁时举办的象征迈向成人阶段的典礼。男孩要进行capping ceremony(冠礼),女孩要进行hair-pinning ceremony(加笄礼)。举办成人礼示意一个人已经come of age(成年),在阅历了puberty(青春期)之后,实现了从adolescent(青少年)向youth(青年)的改变。

2020上海卷

适用地区:上海

假如你是明启中学高三学生李华,前几日,你邀请你的好友王磊下周五去郊野公园一起欣赏露天音乐会。面对天气恶劣、交通不便等原因,王磊一直犹豫不决。假如你是李华,请写一封信说服王磊和你起参加。

        要求包括以下内容:
1.解决王磊的困扰
2.音乐会的重要性
范文1

Dear Wang Lei,

It’s been a while since I heard from you. Last time, I invited you to attend the concert which will be held next Friday in the century park. Though you did not reply to me, the hesitation wearing on your face offered me a glimpse of what was going on in your mind. Maybe it is the recent ghastly weather or the terrible traffic that hinder you from making up your mind. However, as far as I concerned, it’s still worth our efforts.

This concert is not a pop music concert but a classic music one where several prestigious symphony orchestras will perform many well-known compositions. It must be a feast for all the audience. Moreover, chances are that we may have an album with performers’ autographs on it. You should never miss such a fabulous concert!

In terms of difficulties you are worried about, I have already found some solutions. My father will be available on that day so that he can drive us to the scene. I have managed to persuade him to make his promise. In addition, in case of a rainy day, I have prepared two raincoats. I am confident that we will indulge ourselves into the elegant flow of notes.

I am looking forward to hearing your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

范文2

Dear Wang Lei,

How are you doing these days? You’ve been hesitated to go with me to the open-air concert in the country park on Friday. It seems to me what’s holding you back is the terrible weather and the inconvenient transportation, neither of which, in my opinion, is obstacles.

Firstly, there is no need to bother with things uncontrollable, such as the weather condition. We can make plans ahead according to the weather forecasting. If you are not confident with it, we can plan for both rainy day and sunny day.

Secondly, mobile navigation apps can help us choose the best way, saving us from the trouble of worrying about the traffic conditions and the subways’ service time. Lastly, the most important thing is that this concert is such a major event that you would regret if you didn’t come.

Besides, your favorite band will be performing! Wouldn’t it be  amazing to see your idols face to face and even get a chance to talk to them!

Hopefully you will take my suggestion into consideration. And I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

2020浙江卷

适用地区:浙江

共两道写作题:
  1. 外教生病回国了,李华写信询问近况,分享班级最新情况,表达祝愿。

  2. 读后续写。

One possible version

Dear Linda

We're very sorry to hear that you're ill in hospital

We're all worried about you. Have you been getting much better now?

Please don't worry about your illness. What you have to do is to have a good rest and follow the doctor's advice. You needn' t worry about your lessons because the new lessons given these days are not so difficult. When you get back, we are all willing to help you make up the missing lessons at the weekend. Our head teacher along with our classis going to the hospital to see you next Monday.

I hope you will recover soon. Best wishes for you!

Yours

Li Hua

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